Wednesday, 30 July 2014

My small moment


I went to the swimming pool with my little brother .It was cool I had fun.I eat chips it was yam. Then my little brother laugh went I got  into the water. It was cold I was  shaking at the swimming pool then soon  the water was warm. My little brother came he jump into the swimming pool. Then he was  cold. I laugh  at him it was fun.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome story telling Eta, its good to see you using describing words like shaking, it brings your story to life. Well done! The picture you have found to go along with your story is amazing do you know where it was taken at?


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